Nuchiha has arrived.

Name: Nuchiha
Alias: None, for now.
Age: 38
Gender: Male
race: Saiyan
apperance:

Nuchiha looks like Bardock but has Hazel eyes and no scars.
personality: Nuchiha acts kind towards others and is mercifull in his battles,
likes: Power, training, being kind.
dislikes: Weakness.
group affliation: None, yet.

RP sample:
Bardock deciding that he needed more power decides to train in other world. Bardock then balances himself on his index finger and decides to do vertical push ups, Bardock reaches 15,000 and his index finger gives way and makes a crack noise, Bardock examines his index finger and sees that is not broken begins to train on his other index finger. He gets to 5,000 and that one cracks too. Bardock then Meditates and begins to go deep into thought, Bardock stayed there Deep in thought for 1 hour. Then He decides to go and see Snake way and he encounters the bandits again, seeing this as a oppurtunity to train, Bardock begins to fight them.
Bardock got surrounded then he attack the biggest one and knocked him out. then one of the bandits attacked him and almost knocked him out. Bardock then attacks them all with a spin kick and they all fall down knocked out. Bardock then jogs around King Kai's planet until he passes out. then when Bardock wakes up and then begins to punch and kick trees until he bleeds and pass out which was very quick because he passed out once already. Bardock training has ended for now. ( Keep this open until I get out of otherworld. )


History: Nuchiha was your average Saiyan; Rude, tough and merciless. Then Nuchiha was sent to attack a planet and he crashed on Yardrat, Nuchiha got seriously injured and the Yardratians healed him and repaired his ship. Nuchiha then decided to help the Yardratians repair ships and then Nuchiha turned to the alignment of good. Bardock then went to Earth and began a new life there. Once Nuchiha arrived on Earth he landed in a forest and it made a large crater in the ground, the noise disrupted the wild life. Nuchiha emerges from the Saiyan pod in a Capsule Corp. Model Saiyan armor. Bardock then goes into the nearest city and walks around, he takes a news paper and finds out hes in West City. Nuchiha then finds he still has some Zenni on him self and buys a Capsul Corp. house and puts it on the out skirts of the town. Then Nuchiha's adventure begins.

Techniques:

Name: Final spirit Cannon
Colors: Blue
Description: This technqiue was used to assassinate Frieza but failed. This techniques was never actually used. The power of this technique depends on how much the user puts there ki into it.

Name: Moon ball
Color: white or blue like.
Description: This techniques is used by Saiyans to turn Oozaru.

Name: Imprisonment ball
Color: Orange
Description: This technique traps the opponet in a orb of Ki, if the orb touches the ground it explodes.

Name: Galick flash
Color: Purple, or yellow
Description: THis techniques is a combination of Galick gun and Final Flash, this technique takes up alot of Ki.

Your name is Nuchiha, yet you refer to yourself as Bardock multiple times through out your history and RP sample. This application needs work, it's very under detailed. Take a look at some of the others to get the idea of what you should be going for. If you have any questions, now is the time to fire away.

Whoops, can you be canons?

No, but you can be similar I guess...

the RP sample and history needs a little work and i dont see any moves. if you add some and fix your RP and history you'll be approved

The RP sample is me RPing on another site where i'm Bardock. I edited the history is it good enough for a pass?

I still don't see any moves that and I don't see anything else wrong with it.If it is a sample unless the other guys say something add the moves and your approved.

Added techniques. approved?

do you really only want to add the basics? as a matter of fact plz add more on

Err, like what? I haven't learned any yet? You mean like Personal unique moves?

Yes like I have the cosmic comet and the kids revenge your own unique moves please.

well not exactly i prefere you have a couple made up moves but you may put cannon moves on

* edited.

I say Approved until a higher rank says otherwise.

Short list of techniques, but what ever works for you. Approved.

you might wanna add a avatar to your profile. if you dunno how PM me and i'll do it for you. its not a requirement but it's a strong recomendation.